Some people think that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones for communication has a negative effect on young people's reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is often said that the Internet's creation in the nineteenth made easier the way in which
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could learn, work and study. The
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of
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and mobile phones was seen at first as a democratization of knowledge, culture, and books.
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, I think that
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primary ideology was totally wrong following the side effects and trajectory and
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of these devices. Indeed. I do think that
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and mobile phones for
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have a negative effect on
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's reading and writing
skills
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, especially for young
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.
First,
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young
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have been raised with
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and
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. The problem is that most of the content shared on
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and mobile phones, especially because of the
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of social, are
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, images, and emoticons.
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, to get informed of the news,
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used to communicate with others, write letters to
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who were informed of the situation, or read newspapers before the Internet was created. Today, most -if not all young
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are being informed by watching
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on the Internet and socials.
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, we can attest that young
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are getting used to a virtual world made of
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and images. But not only are newspapers concerned, but
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all kinds of information. Indeed, when young
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, especially students, needed to find information for a school project they were confronted with what a lot of young
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are "reluctant to" today: opening a book, an encyclopedia. Indeed, many young
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are
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disinterested in books as
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and
mobiles
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are making on-web research easier and faster. Young
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are,
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, reading less and hoping to find quickly a piece of information
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of reading an entire article about it.
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, who reads an entire book about a country to communicate with someone from another country when they can just find a short article about the culture they are trying to know better?
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, writing
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are
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strictly damaged by
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and
mobiles
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. Because we are more connected to
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thanks to
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and
mobiles
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, we increase the process of talking with everyone, everywhere, the fastest as it can be. Before, thanks to the
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of letters,
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had time to think about what they would write and how they would like their text to be perfectly
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and well written. Not only letters but
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phone calls would help
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develop their writing
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as you could not
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abbreviations and slang as
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do every day by texting. A single
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yellow face called a smiley- can replace dozens of words if not more.
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are developing slang,
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,
videos
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, and GIF language
instead
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of writing what they feel, think, and want to say in a text.
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, vocal messages become a threat to reading and writing as these two
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are becoming useless in
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and mobile
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.
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, creating a technology through which users of these devices are enabled to dictate a sentence that the mobile will write in a text makes
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even more unskilled in writing and reading.
To conclude
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, the prominent
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of
mobiles
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and
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for
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has numerous negative effects on young
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's writing and reading
skills
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. Indeed, it keeps them away from reading and especially writing because of vocal messages and the creation of slang.
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becomes a way for
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to tell what they have to say without thinking about what they are writing and saying.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • over-reliance
  • comprehension skills
  • digital content
  • sustained reading capabilities
  • texting and messaging apps
  • abbreviations
  • acronyms
  • emojis
  • formally and coherently
  • educational resources
  • scholarly articles
  • educational apps
  • enhance
  • digital platforms
  • blogs
  • social media posts
  • online forums
  • concise
  • impactful writing
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