Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Other believe that some infornation is too important or to valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion

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researches
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plays an important role in
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of
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country
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the country
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. Some
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thinks
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it is
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a contribution
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towards society to share
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regarding
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their
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selves but some
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it can be too much involvement of self without any particular reason.
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me, it is beneficial to share
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for
researches
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research
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and academic use but it should not be too personal. In
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world, where
people
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do not like to share much
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are
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have their strong
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of
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regarding what they think. Fear of using
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in
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way is constant.
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why,
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prefers
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not to give any
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to anyone. Before sharing
data
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, there should
a
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written consent form with everything mentioned
such
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as, where is
data
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going to be used, which
people
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can have access to the
data
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,
how
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and how
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long
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data
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the data
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is going to be kept in research.
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, everything should be explained to the person before taking any
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from them who
are
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not able to read and understand consent. As
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there was a case in
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the United
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kingdom
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in earlier times when some of the researchers used
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the black
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community for research
purpose
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purposes
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by telling them
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about wrong
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medical
condition
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conditions
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and
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giving
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them
chapatties
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chapattis
with some chemicals. On the other
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hand
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, we should give
information
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to the
reseachers
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researchers
as it can help our
country
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to achieve success in finding new treatments
to
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some disease conditions.
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, it will be easy for researchers to get
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in
local
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the local
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community and they do not have to spend much money to go to vast areas for it. Saving money on
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can be beneficial as they could use
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money on other
resouces
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resources
.
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, finding
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in
same
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the same
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geographical area can help in saving time as well. In conclusion,
community
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the community
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plays a vital role in
development
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the development
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of
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country
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the country
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. So,
its
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it
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is our responsibility to contribute towards our nation. We should give
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to participate in big research projects as it helps in
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the country
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country
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country's
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growth. But, it should not be too personal
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and
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can cause troubles in someone's life. Again, researchers
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need to keep
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information
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the information
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confidential to prevent their
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from any
problem
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problems
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and
inconvience
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inconvenience
.
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