It is better to buy just a few expensive clothes, rather than lots of cheaper clothes. Do you agree or disagree

In
this
modern era, some people
prefers
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prefer
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buying
few
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a few
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expensive
clothes
while
others prefer lots of cheaper ones.
According to
my opinion, buying cheaper but more in quantity is
good
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a good
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option than buying only
few
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a few
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from expensive brands.
Firstly
,
chpear
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cheap
clothes
can be affordable by anyone working with minimum wage or having more
responisbilites
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responsibilities
responsibility
of
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for
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family.
For example
, if there is only one
breedwinner
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breadwinner
of the family and they live in
joint
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family with few children. It is always
a
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the
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best option to go for cheap
clothes
as with
this
, one
breedwinner
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breadwinner
breed winner
can help each family member with
clothes
,
while
it can be difficult for him/her to buy expensive stuff for them.
Secondly
, when somebody goes for cheaper options,
pepple
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people
get a lot of choices
on
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in
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clothes
.
For example
, Primark in
United
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the United
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Kingdom
sell
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variety
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a variety
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of
clothes
at
very
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a very
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low price that everyone can afford. Youngsters that
goes
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go
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to colleges and universities prefer wearing different
clothes
everyday
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every day
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in a week. It is easy for them to get more outfits from Primark as
comparasive
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compared
to any expensive store.
Moreover
, they try not to wear any
clothes
on
repitition
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repetition
. So, it could be convenient to wear
outfit
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an outfit
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only once and bin it after.
Finally
, because folks like buying cheaper stuff than expensive. The competition in markets
have been
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has
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increased
alot
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a lot
,
that
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which
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is helping in
growth
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the growth
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of
country
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the country
a country
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. On top of it, Many countries import
clothes
from one to another
that
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which
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helps them to make good
contacts
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contact
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with each
others
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other
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.
For example
, Primark
clothes
are mostly imported from Bangladesh. In conclusion, buying cheaper
clothes
is always a good option as it saves
alot
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a lot
of money and helps
person
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people
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in each and every way in
this
modern lifestyle.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainability
  • long-lasting
  • cost-per-wear
  • economical
  • investing
  • ethical manufacturing
  • transparent
  • exclusivity
  • designs
  • mass-produced
  • accessibility
  • budget
  • fast fashion
  • trends
  • maintenance
  • dry cleaning
  • social status
  • psychological implications
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