Most career choices demand vocational skills or specialist knowledge. However, despite this, most schools still teach academic subjects such as history or social studies. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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curriculum
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always been debatable. People believe that hands-on skills are needed based on the current career demands and popularity,
despit
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despite
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, numerous
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schools
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include academic
subjects
like
history
. Children can learn about
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evolution, as well
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them associated
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their roots, but there are
also
drawbacks which are hard to
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neglect.
Firstly
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inclusion
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the inclusion
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of traditional courses like
history
, is that
students
can keep them associated with their roots and cultures. In
this
increasingly technologically advanced world,
this
is quite necessary that
students
and professionals pay gratitude to where we are and how long we
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.
Secondly
,
one
can understand
about
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the evolution
in
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different specialized domains.
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the Electric
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vehicle revolution, understanding
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,
such
as the advantages and drawbacks of
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revolution
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us to reach
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this
critical juncture for sustainability development and
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base
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a base
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for
further
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On the other hand
,
one
major problem related to the inclusion of
subjects
like social studies and geography has proven to be useless in
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a technologically
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adavanced
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advanced
world requiring specialized
skillsets
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skill sets
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.
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, in
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era,
one
needs to be
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proficient in
the
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software skills,
however
, having taught
history
subject in
school
can prove to be utterly wasteful, as on
internet
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the internet
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one
can retrieve
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history
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matter of minutes.
Moreover
,
this
proves to be a
wastage
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of
school
resources, and
students
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students'
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times
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, which could
otherwise
be used for following their passion and
further
sharpening their
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skill sets
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.
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,
subjects
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that
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of social studies in early educational career
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proven to be a demotivating factor, which in the long run,
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students
leave education altogether and get themselves associated with bad habits. In conclusion,
although
traditional
subjects
can be helpful,
however
, the need
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highly vocalized skillsets,
along with
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to avoid wasted time and effort are major drawbacks to be taken into account when going with
traditional
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schooling approach.
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