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The graph shows the actual and predicted percentage change in employment in the UK, by education level.

The graph shows the actual and predicted percentage change in employment in the UK, by education level.
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The lines indicate the real and future change in employment in the United Kingdom by education level.
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 writing will summarise, give several pieces of main features, and compare when necessary.
Overall
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, there are four categories based on education degree that are highlighted in the chart from 1990 to 2025, some are increasing
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 others are falling. The unit
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 used is in percentage. To start with, in 1990 there was not any data for the graph, indicated by all lines intercepted at 0 value.
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, the need for workers possessing bachelor's and master's degrees is skyscraping, noting that postgraduate students are more highly requested than graduate ones.
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, there are two more education levels that have not been described, which are people with no certificate and undergraduates. As time went by, these two were constantly less needed for the workforce, defined by the falling slope from the beginning of the graph to the end, reaching about -2 and -15%, respectively.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "indicate" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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