Some people are concerned that children spend too much time on computers – playing games, chatting and watching videos. But all this time is actually good preparation for children, who will have to spend many hours working on computers throughout their education and working lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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are concerned that

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spend too much

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– playing games, chatting and watching videos. But all

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is actually good preparation for

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, who will have to spend many hours working on

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throughout their education and working lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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have different views about whether or not

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should be reduced. Some say that it is harmful,

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others think that it is a preparation for the future. I personally believe that

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will inevitably spend much

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using

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when they work or study, so we should allow them to keep doing

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, it is generally claimed that we are moving to a digital era where

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will mostly use digital materials in their studies.

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means (that)

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will no longer use printed materials, and they should all be ready to read on the

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, I think (that) some activities that

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do on

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now are relevant to

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, watching videos and chatting will be parts of the studying process as they discuss assignments together via chatting apps, or watch online lectures.

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should get used to these activities from an early age as part of their training to face higher education. Another thing to consider is that the trend in workplaces is

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shifting and employees spend an enormous amount of

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in front of their screens now.

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is because of the working-from-anywhere system that allows

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to still be productive when they are not in the office.

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are likely to have high

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in the future anyway

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the demand to stay productive.

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, I personally would argue that

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students are having now is a very good investment for their professional performance in the future. All in all, in my point of view, parents should allow their

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to spend a lot of

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on

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with the aim of giving them enough exposure to something that will be useful in their academic lives and

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. I tend to feel that the

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spent on

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should be seen as something positive in

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digital era.