The graph shows the actual and predicted percentage change in employment in the UK, by education level.

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The graph line presents the percentage of the real and forecast transformation in employment in the United Kingdom, the percentage calculated by education level.

Overall

, bachelor's degrees and master's degrees experienced an upward trend among high schools and schools without certificates in the UK in the given period.

To begin

, the companies in UK prefer to master's degree rather than other graduate levels. It can be shown by the increase in percentage from 1990 until 35 years later. There was a significant improvement in 2005 about 10% each year. Other than that, the industry

also

looking for students who graduate with bachelor's

degree

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. The graph shows a rocket leap from 1990 to 1995 about 5% before it reached

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highest peak at 15% in 2000.

However

, the graph remains fluctuating until the end of the period.

On the other hand

, there are two education levels which

less

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favorable

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in the United Kingdom, high school and youngsters who graduate without a certificate. It can clearly be shown that there is

rapid

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decrease from the beginning to the end, reaching about -2 for high school and -20 for students with no school certificate.

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