The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (Co2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph gives information about the average
carbon
dioxide
( CO2) emissions
per person
in United
Kingdom, Correct article usage
the United
Sweden
, Italy and Portugal from 1967 to 2007.
It can clearly seen that, average carbon
dioxide
( CO2) emissions
per person
in the
Portugal and Italia the most increase Correct article usage
apply
commuters
Change preposition
in commuters
throught
the period shown. Correct your spelling
throughout
through
Also
, while
average carbon
dioxide
( CO2) emissions
per person
in the
Portugal and Correct article usage
apply
Italia
increase gradually, Correct your spelling
Italy
this
figure of
Change preposition
for
Sweden
and United
Kingdom falls steadily.
In 1967, average Correct article usage
the United
carbon
dioxide
(CO2) emissions
per person
in the
Portugal started at 1,2 metric Correct article usage
apply
tonnes
. While
this
figures
of Italy started at 4,2 metric tonnes
. Then
both figures
gradually increase to 2007. This
Correct determiner usage
These
figures
of
Portugal a Change preposition
for
peak
at 5,5 metric tonnes
and this
Correct determiner usage
the
figures
of
Italy a Change preposition
for
peak
at 7,8 metric tonnes
.
While
average carbon
dioxide
( CO2) emissions
per person
in the
Portugal grew a Correct article usage
apply
peak
at 5, 5 metric tonnes
and this
Correct determiner usage
the
figures
of
Italy roseChange preposition
for
a
Change preposition
to a
peak
at 7,8. This
Correct determiner usage
The
figures
of
Change preposition
for
United
Kingdom Correct article usage
the United
drops
steadily, it started from 11 metric Wrong verb form
dropped
tonnes
and this
Change the determiner
these
figures
decrease
to 8,3 metric Wrong verb form
decreased
tonnes
in 2007. Average carbon
dioxide
( CO2) emission per person
in the
Correct article usage
apply
Sweden
started at 8,3 metric tonnes
and this
figures
continued Fix the agreement mistake
figure
sharply
rise to 1977. Fix the infinitive
to sharply
However
, this
Correct determiner usage
the
figures
of
Change preposition
for
Sweden
sharply falls
from 1987 to 2007.Wrong verb form
fell
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