The graph shows the impact of vaccinations on the incidence of whooping cough, a childhood illness, between 1940 and 1990 in Britain
The given graph provides information on
vaccination
impact related to whooping cough incidence or a childhood illness over a span of one-half century from 1940 to 1940 in the United Kingdom. Overall
, there is evidence that both vaccination
and case trends were related to each other. While
the vaccination
started rising, the cases
decreased significantly. In 1940, the number of reported cases
was high which stood at slightly below 60000 cases
, increasing to its nadir up to around 170000 in the following years before decreasing to just over 60000 in 1945. These numbers kept rising at approximately 168000 until vaccination
was involved between 1955 to 1960. Regarding vaccination
, as can be seen from the graph, 81% of vaccine uptake was distributed, remaining stable dose until around 1977 which resulted in a significant decrease of nearly 8 times. Furthermore
, while
the vaccine uptake was just 30%, the cases
ascended up to about 60000 but dropped when the vaccination
program was applied, around 94% at the end
of the period, showing stable trends of just less than about 100 cases
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