The graph shows the impact of vaccinations on the incidence of whooping cough, a childhood illness, between 1940 and 1990 in Britain
The given graph provides information on
vaccination
impact related to whooping cough incidence or a childhood illness over a span of one-half century from 1940 to 1940 in the United Kingdom. Use synonyms
Overall
, there is evidence that both Linking Words
vaccination
and case trends were related to each other. Use synonyms
While
the Linking Words
vaccination
started rising, the Use synonyms
cases
decreased significantly. In 1940, the number of reported Use synonyms
cases
was high which stood at slightly below 60000 Use synonyms
cases
, increasing to its nadir up to around 170000 in the following years before decreasing to just over 60000 in 1945. These numbers kept rising at approximately 168000 until Use synonyms
vaccination
was involved between 1955 to 1960. Regarding Use synonyms
vaccination
, as can be seen from the graph, 81% of vaccine uptake was distributed, remaining stable dose until around 1977 which resulted in a significant decrease of nearly 8 times. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, Linking Words
while
the vaccine uptake was just 30%, the Linking Words
cases
ascended up to about 60000 but dropped when the Use synonyms
vaccination
program was applied, around 94% Use synonyms
at the end
of the period, showing stable trends of just less than about 100 Linking Words
cases
.Use synonyms
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