The internet allows us to stay connected with each other no matter where we are. On the other hand, it also isolates us and encourages people not to socialise.
Everybody knows that the
Internet
is so common nowadays. Due to
the fact that we live in a technology time
. A lot
of people want to opt to use
it to contact others. However
, others believe that it isolates humans. In my opinion, it is the best way to communicate with everyone. In this
essay, I will explain some reasons.
On the one hand, how internet
connect people? most of us use
it to keep in touch with relatives who live in another country. that is
Due to
the fact that it lets us use
vıdeo calls. Moreover
, it is free, we do not need to pay money for telephone, letter or fax. For example
, my sister has lived in Germany for 20 years. She could not call us a lot
in the beginning because the telephone was so expensive at that time
. However
, she can call us every day even on video calls. Because she uses the internet
. İt shows us how it makes us connected to others.
On the other hand
, how internet
isolate the community? A lot
of children and adults use
it for games, especially kids. The games may be dangerous for kids, due to
the fact that some kids spend too much time
a day, which makes them isolated from street games and their friends. For instance
, my friend's son was addicted to a game and ın that we dıdnt see him. The example shows us the internet
is isolating people and is not good every time
according to
how we use
it.
To sum up
, to use
everything is like medicine , if you get enough dose it makes you healthy however
if you get too much it makes you worse or dead. In my opinion, the internet
is very useful and it has a lot
of benefits if we know how to use
it.Submitted by ares.grup on
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