The internet allows us to stay connected with each other no matter where we are. On the other hand, it also isolates us and encourages people not to socialise.

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Everybody knows that the
Internet
is so common nowadays.
Due to
the fact that we live in a technology
time
. A
lot
of people want to opt to
use
it to contact others.
However
, others believe that it isolates humans. In my opinion, it is the best way to communicate with everyone. In
this
essay, I will explain some reasons. On the one hand, how
internet
connect people? most of us
use
it to keep in touch with relatives who live in another country.
that is
Due to
the fact that it lets us
use
vıdeo calls.
Moreover
, it is free, we do not need to pay money for telephone, letter or fax.
For example
, my sister has lived in Germany for 20 years. She could not call us a
lot
in the beginning because the telephone was so expensive at that
time
.
However
, she can call us every day even on video calls. Because she uses the
internet
. İt shows us how it makes us connected to others.
On the other hand
, how
internet
isolate the community? A
lot
of children and adults
use
it for games, especially kids. The games may be dangerous for kids,
due to
the fact that some kids spend too much
time
a day, which makes them isolated from street games and their friends.
For instance
, my friend's son was addicted to a game and ın that we dıdnt see him. The example shows us the
internet
is isolating people and is not good every
time
according to
how we
use
it.
To sum up
, to
use
everything is like medicine , if you get enough dose it makes you healthy
however
if you get too much it makes you worse or dead. In my opinion, the
internet
is very useful and it has a
lot
of benefits if we know how to
use
it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • instantaneous communication
  • vast distances
  • maintaining relationships
  • professional connections
  • face-to-face meetings
  • in-person communication skills
  • local friendships
  • social isolation
  • community events
  • niche interests
  • like-minded people
  • virtual relationships
  • emotional connection
  • feelings of loneliness
  • superficial friendships
  • overly reliant
  • real-world relationships
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