The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given tables depict the
sales
information of fair trade-labelled coffee
and bananas
in five European Countries between 1999 and 2004.
Overall
, the sales
of coffee
and bananas
experienced a significant increase in all countries. Additionally
, the UK
made up a high number of sales
for the coffee
, while
Switzerland
for the bananas
.
Starting with coffee
, at the beginning of the period, the UK
contributed the biggest coffee
sales
at 1.5m, followed by Switzerland
at 3m. Then
, Denmark
and Belgium
made up at 1.8m and 1m, respectively. Meanwhile, Sweden
only stood at a tiny fraction below 1m. In the following period, the coffee
sales
in the UK
increased to 20m. Furthermore
, the sales
doubled in Switzerland
. Denmark
rose by 0.2m, and Sweden
increased at the exact same number. In addition
, Belgium
has faced a growth of 0.7m
Moving onto bananas
, in 1999, Switzerland
had the biggest sales
for bananas
at 15m. Afterwards, Denmark
stood in the second position at 2m, followed by Sweden
at 1.8m. Then
, the UK
made up 1m, while
Belgium
constituted 0.6m. Moreover
, in 2004, Switzerland
's sales
increased significantly to 47m. The UK
also
faced a notable rise to 5.5m, and Belgium
ascended to 4m. In contrast
, Sweden
and Denmark
experienced a decline of 0.8m and 1.1m, respectively.Submitted by zakiyaartanti19 on
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