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Grand parents are often taking care of the grand children, what are the advantages and disadvantages of it.

#parents #care #children
Grandparentsparents in fact are a blessing from God ,
However
,
that is
 most of the
time
 has beneficial effects
besides
 a few disadvantages .In
this
 ,essay I will discuss both sides. In the beginning
grand
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parents
consider
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considered
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 the source of the pace ,
However
 , many young
parents
 prefer to keep their
children
 with them to get high
caring
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care
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,
for example
, every child likes to go to their
grandparents
' house, and they enjoy the
time
 with them,
Moreover
, the
grandparents
parents
 have fulfilling of love they will care more about
children
 that their
parents
 work and don't have
time
 to sit with them . On the other way there dark side of
grandparents
 caring for
children
 , one of these , is that old people can not going behind the kid's action ,
Furthermore
, some of the
children
is
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 very stubborn they could face challenges with controlling ,
Additionally
, caring centres are very expensive and spend a lot of money so the best way to keep the kids safe is for their
grandparents
 . In conclusion,
grandparents
 are usually a good place for all to spend
time
 full of love and a nice
time
 to learn from their experiences.
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