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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinio

#people #boys #girls #schools #benefit #opinio
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 that educating
boys
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girls
 in
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separate
 schools helps them to get
better
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 education. But,
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 majority of
people
believes
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 that both the
boys
 and
girls
benifit
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benefit
 more when they
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 to
mixed
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school
. In my perspective when
boys
 and
girls
attends
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 the same
school
 they
achives
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achieve
archives
achieves
 greater
benifits
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benefits
 because they have the
oppourtunity
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opportunity
 to develop
greater
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 communication skills. On the one hand,
people
 who
thinks
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 that
boys
 and
girls
 should not be allowed to attend in same
school
.
Beacuse
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Because
 when the opposite genders
people
 are in same space they might hamper each other attentions.
Such
 as
,
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 there
maybe
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a
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students who are more attentive
on
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stuidies
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studies
 and cannot learn efficiently and focus because of the
amount
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number
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 of students present in the class if both the
girls
 and
boys
 are in
school
.
On the other hand
,
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majority of
people
 who
thinks
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think
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 that both
boys
 and
girls
 should go to
same
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the same
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school
benifits
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benefit
 more because when opposite genders of students are present in the same class get the
oppourtunity
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opportunity
 to communicate
that
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 helps them to learn more efficiently. Because the distinct perspectives and styles of studying of opposite genders present in the
calss
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class
helps
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help
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 them grow more
knowlede
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knowledge
 and communication skills. In conclusion, when
boys
 and
girls
addmitted
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 to
same
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school
 they get
the
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a
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 better
oppourtunity
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opportunity
 to learn more that might help them in future and help
to
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them to
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 deal
certain
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 situations.
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