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The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now.

The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now.
#maps #show #bookstore
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The map below illustrates the changes that occurred in
bookstore
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bookstores
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 from 2000 till 2024. In 2000 there
were
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was
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fiction
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a fiction
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 section in the
north-east
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northeast
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 part of
building
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the building
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.Near the
entrance
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entrance,
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 there
was
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were
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 books about travel.In the west-south of
store
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the store
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 was
service
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the service
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 desk and east from it
the
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 Non-
fiction
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 bookshelf
located
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apply
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.There were three sections about the art,hobbies,
cookery
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and cookery
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. Nowadays,there
were
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are
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 a large amount of changes at the bookstore.The three bookshelves were replaced by three tables.The Non-
fiction
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 part of
shelf
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the shelf
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replaced
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was replaced
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 by
cafe
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the cafe
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 and shifted to
East-south
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the East-south
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 part of
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fiction
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the fiction
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.The
fiction
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 section
were
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was
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 divided into four parts where art,travel,hobbies and
fiction
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placed
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were placed
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.The place of new books and travel
shelf
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shelves
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 still remained.
Overall
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,the graph shows
gradation
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a gradation
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 of
bookshop’s
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the bookshop’s
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 interior
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Linking words: Add more linking words.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words fiction with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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