Your English-speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport. Write an email to your friend. In your letter, recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn explain how your friend could learn this sport suggest that you both learn this sport together

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Dear Aman, Hope you find

this

letter in your radiant situation. How is everything going? As I have known you for many years, I am easily aware of your preferences. Whenever I had a conversation with you regarding sports, Cricket was the one in which you had shown interest.

Moreover

this

game would be easier for you to learn as you are very familiar with its rules and regulations and you are a big fan of watching it on television. In our town, there is a very famous stadium for

this

game. You can join that as I have heard a lot about it from my other friends.

In addition

, our stadium provides a free kit to the new members. You do not need to worry about buying that.

Even for

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a long time, I

also

thought of joining but I did not find any companion. Now, if you will agree we both can go together to

this

cricket centre. Your house is on my way, I can give you a ride. I will wait to hear back from you. Yours lovingly, Jashan

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