The lower graphs depicts a electricity generation that is used wave power.

The lower graphs depicts a electricity generation that is used wave power.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The lower graphs depicts a electricity generation that is used wave power.
The lower graphs
depicts
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a
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apply
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electricity generation
that is
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used
wave
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power. Generating electricity from sea waves is harmless and safe for the environment because there are
used
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use
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only
power
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the power
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of nature,
instead
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of dangerous
manufacturer
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manufacturers
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. First of all, the
wave
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enters
to
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the chamber, which is connected to the column with
built-in
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the built-in
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turbine
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. The
wave
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creates the flow of air
,
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when it enters
to
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the chamber.
Subsequently
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, the
air flow
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airflow
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is used to rotate a
turbine
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in a column. The
turbine
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in turn
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, in turn,
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powers a generator,
that is
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used to produce the electricity. After that, when the
wave
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moves back, it sucks the air back from the column, and the
turbine
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is
then
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rotated in
same
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direction.
This
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cycle repeats over and over again

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "that is".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words wave, turbine with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "depicts" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "wave" was used 5 times.
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