The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after f inishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after f inishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie chart explains what Anthropology graduates chose for their path after graduation.

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, the table describes the type of salaries they received by choosing a different type of employment. To commence with, most university graduates opt for full-time work, a ratio consisting of 52%.

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, they chose to work as a part-timer or stay unemployed which is 15% and 12% respectively.

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, only 5% of the degree holders consider both part-time work and postgrad study together and 8% of the students

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like to opt for a master's program. Moving on to the salary table, 80% of freelancers and 80% government sector received revenue of more than 75,000.

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, only 55% of employees from the private sector obtained a salary of more than 75,000$.

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, 20% of the freelancer and government sector workers get revenue below 75,000.

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almost 45% of the employees gained a salary below 75,000$.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

149 words

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