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You recently booked a part-time course at a college. You now need to cancel your booking. Write a letter to the college administrator. In your letter, say which part-time course you booked explain why you need to cancel your booking ask about booking a different course Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam, I hope
this
 letter finds you well, I am writing to ask you to cancel the part-time
course
 that enrolled in one month ago. Recently, I have had some problems with my paintings in the art subject, so I decided to take a part-time
course
 after classes on October 26th. I was very excited to start
this
course
.
However
,
last
 Monday when I got home, I realized that all my painting tools
were
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 bitten by my dog and all of them
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 up damaged and now I cannot afford to buy them again. Fortunately, I got a 9 in my
last
 art exam and I think that I do not need
this
course
 anymore.
On the other hand
, my father purchased me a guitar and I
no
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 not have any idea how to play it, so I would like to make a reservation for the music
course
 that will begin next Monday. I hope you forgive the problem
this
 may
caused
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 you and be assured of my assistance next Monday. Andres Medina
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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