The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The line graph provides the data about amount of people visiting a
museum
during the summer
and winter season
in the year 2003.
Fix the agreement mistake
seasons
Overall
, it can be seen that most of the indivuals
like to visit the Correct your spelling
individuals
museum
in summer
instead
of visiting in winter and it is also
clear that people prefers
to come to the Correct subject-verb agreement
prefer
museum
in the early hours of the day such
as from 9 am to 12 pm
.
Regarding the number of visitors in summer
, it begins at 9 am and climbs rapidly to almost 1300 visitors till 10 am, then
there is a slight increase between 10 am to 11 pm
reaching around 1500 visitors which is the highest number in summer
and after it gradually starts decreasing from 12 pm
to 16 pm
, then
drops more before closing.
In the winter season
it can be observed that people are less interested in visiting the Add a comma
,season
museum
as only 600 folks visit the museum
from 9 am to 12 pm
. Then
the number dropped steadily till 15pm and remained stable at 18:00 pm
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