The bar chart below shows the percentage of households with access to the internet in three European countries between 2007 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph represents the percentage of households with access to internet usage in
Germany
, the UK and Spain
from 2007 to 2019.
Overall
, it is clear from the bar chart that it had a gradual improvement every two years. The usage of the Internet by households in Spain
was comparatively smaller than the other two countries whereas
Germany
has a quite larger percentage.
The survey that took place in 2007 clearly illustrates the 10% difference in each country
approximately. Moreover
, the country
United Kindom started to rise in the year 2011 and had very good access to the internet throughout the upcoming years. In the final survey which was conducted in 2019, the country
United Kingdom approximately matches Germany
.
When it comes to the country
of Spain
, it was very low in usage but eventually had a step-by-step growth from 2007 to 2017. There was a shocking result for Spain
in 2019 where it almost matched the growth of the United Kingdom and Germany
. As a result
that had been taken in 2019, the country
Germany
had a leading percentage of 95%, the United Kingdom ranged between 92% to 95% and ,,
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finally
Spain
touched the value of 90%.Submitted by insighttribez on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words germany, spain, country with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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