A neighbour has damaged your automobile while parking his/her car in the lane in front of your house. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter: explain why you’re writing describe the damage to your car and express your feelings about it recommend what steps he/she should take to resolve the situation.

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Dear Jennifer, I hope you are doing well. I am writing to inform you about the incident that happened to my

car

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. I realised that my

car

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had been damaged on the right side of

it's

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front

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morning. I parked it just behind your

car

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on the parking lane in front of my house yesterday evening. I hadn't been aware of how

this

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damage occurred till I checked the security camera. When you were leaving

this

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park lane

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morning, you hit my

car

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and to continue your way. I think that it happened

due to

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carelessness,

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, I am so frustrated about it. My

car

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has repairement done recently due the fact that another hit from you. I wish you had informed me about that. Could you please afford all the repairement expenses for that

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I would like to request more caution

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you are parking on the parking lane. I am

forwaiting

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your call about how you

fix

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the problem. I am leaving my

car

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at the service now, you can call the

car

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service about the total cost of

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. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes, Jane

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

196 words

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