The pie charts show the destination of export goods in three countries in 2010.

The pie charts show the destination of export goods in three countries in 2010.
The presented pie charts illustrate the proportion of
destiened
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destined
continents exported
goods
in
Argentina
,
Mexico
and
Chile
in 2010.
Overall
, a majority of
export
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exports
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of
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from
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Mexico
went to
USA
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the USA
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while
Argentina
and
Chile
sent their
goods
to
other
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apply
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Latin America more than other continents.
According to
the pie charts,
Argentina
and
Chile
had
a
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the
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same pattern in exporting
goods
in 2010. In
Argentina
16% of
goods
sent
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were sent
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to
USA
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the USA
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which was 2% less than
Chile
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in Chile
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while
62% of
Mexico
exported
goods
sent to
this
continent. Just more than a quarter of exported in
Argentina
were sent to Europe
while
38% of them exported to other Latin America.
In contrast
, in
Chile
, quite the same proportion of exports
sent
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was sent
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to Europe and Latin America for 30 and 31 percent respectively. About a fifth of these
contries
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contry's
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exports
sent
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were sent
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to other
continets
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continents
while
Mexico
exported 6% of its
goods
to each sector.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words goods, argentina, mexico, chile with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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