The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors-agriculture, manufacturing and business and financial services-to the UK economy in the twentieth cenutury. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The following graph depicts three main fields that influenced the
economy
of the UK in the twentieth century in percentages. Those fields include agriculture
, manufacturing, business
and finance
.
Overall
, in the first half of the 20th ,century agriculture
played a huge role in the economy
of the UK, unlike the second half because business
and finance
became more important during that period of time. We can observe a downward trend in agriculture
and manufacturing,
and an upward trend in the influence of Remove the comma
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business
and financial sectors
.
Agriculture
made up almost 50%, manufacturing around 45%, and the contribution
of finance
and business
was less than 10% of the economy
of the UK, in 1900. From 1950 until 1975, the impact of each of these sectors
except for manufacturing increased. Manufacturing made up less than 40% of the economy
. However
, the contribution
of agriculture
made up more than 60%, and finance
and business
made up almost 10% of the economy
. In 1975, the influence of both agriculture
and manufacturing decreased, they made up almost 10% and more than 30%, respectively. The contribution
of the business
and financial sectors
kept increasing, they made up approximately 20 of the economy
. Lastly
in 2000, the impact of agriculture
and manufacturing continued decreasing, they made up less than 10% and around 15%, respectively. But the contribution
of the business
and financial sectors
increased dramatically, it made up around 40% of the economy
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