the diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at west park secondary school since its construction in 1950. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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From the diagrams, we can see how West Park Secondary School have been modernised since its erection in 1950. The chart gives three representations of the institution and the area nearby within the years 1950, 1980 and 2010.
The school was built in 1950 in front of the main road on the right of some houses and farmland which,
according to
the data, was rear to the buildings. Furthermore
, annexed to the institute there was a playground, which was located behind the institute.
According to
the maps, after thirty years, the houses have been replaced by a car park and the main building has been renovated with a new science block, both in front of the main road. In addition
, in 1980 a sports field, which is always on the right of the playground, took the place of the farmland.
Lastly
, in 2010 few modifications have been executed. For instance
, the car park has been extended to a larger area taking up room from the sports field. Moreover
, the sports area has been scaled down as well as
the playground, either located on the bottom part of the map behind the school.Submitted by valeria.pomante on
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