Q. Some people think its better to have friends that have same opinion, while others belive it is good having friends who sometimes have different opinion. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

is considered an essential part of an individual's life. Right from pre-school till the
day of life we keep on meeting people. Some have the same thought process
others don’t. I agree with the fact that it's good to have different
among friends.
To begin
with, a
that has been made during school days often
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longer than any other
. As the individuals have been going to the same school and have similar activities, usually end up thinking alike.
is beneficial as it does not result in any conflicts among the friends.
For instance
, a recent survey conducted at a school revealed that the majority of children feel motivated , and have better concentration when they are among their group of friends with similar mindsets, rather than children of different mindsets.
On the contrary
, there is another section of individuals who support the fact that difference in opinion is essential and
, helps in understanding other people's perspectives. The debate over a particular topic not only gives a wider scope to understand an opinion but
helps in maintaining a competitive
For example
, there are 80% of individuals have said out of their personal experience that they have different
from their fellow teammates
competitive conversation helps them think out of the box in all circumstances. To sum it up, despite all the
shared, I believe it is in an individual's personal interest to maintain the friendships they want.Personally, I believe that there should be a healthy and competitive difference in
rather than conflicts.
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