The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
One of the most crucial aspects of scientific research is increasing human
life
.Although
there is some truth that the reason for studying science
is to improve our life
, that is
not true that it is the only aim for investigating science
.
First of all, science
aim should be Change noun form
science's
improving
people’s Change the verb form
to improve
life
for several reasons. One of them is to Fix the agreement mistake
lives
increasing
human Change the form of the verb
increase
life
expectancy, the longer we live, the happier we are. Humans for a long time ago
has developed medical to Rephrase
apply
lingered
Verb problem
prolong
life
’s long , treated diseases and illness to become stronger and healthier. After thousand
years, human has created Correct article usage
a thousand
science
in order to investigate more about how our life
can be improved. Moreover
, developing technology also
crucial Add a missing verb
is also
with
human Change preposition
to
life
. Nowadays, many AI robots can help people with their stuff such
as doing housework, therefore
, make
our Wrong verb form
making
life become
more comfortable and easier. Wrong verb form
lives
The
Correct article usage
Science
science
plays an important role to continue upgrade
these bots. Wrong verb form
upgrading
For instance
, research indicates that 60% of scientists are evolving day by day to help humanity more simple
.
Change the word
simply
On the other hand
, improving people’s lives should not be the only reason. One aspect scientists must consider is preserving our planet. Due to
increasing in
industrialization and improvement in technology, the Earth Change preposition
apply
are
heavily damaged by humans, especially Change the verb form
is
scientists
Correct word choice
since scientists
destroyed
the environment for their testing. Correct pronoun usage
who destroyed
Thus
, technologists must come up with ideas to protect our planets
, not only a place for Fix the agreement mistake
planet
only
human lives, it Correct word choice
apply
also
habitat
of Add an article
the habitat
a habitat
billion
Fix the agreement mistake
billions
animals
. Change preposition
of animals
A
environmentalist said that with Change the article
An
this
industrialise
pace, we are going to Replace the word
industrialised
destroyed
our home in nearly a century. Change the verb
destroy
Furthermore
, science
must help human
to know more about the Fix the agreement mistake
humans
natural
around Replace the word
nature
ous
. We have less knowledge about the range of deep oceans or high mountains, so that, scientific methods should be applied to Correct your spelling
us
rise
our Correct your spelling
raise
intellectual
.
In conclusion, Replace the word
intellect
science
are
so important Change the verb form
is
with
human. Change preposition
to
Nevertheless
, rather than only focus
on Wrong verb form
focusing
increasing
our lives, it should Verb problem
improving
also
focus on our planet , or even outside the universe to make people become smarter.Submitted by namkhanh.tran2310 on
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