You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the average monthly
temperature
in
Paris
,
Dubai
and
Sydney
for every
month
. The
temperature
is measured in Celsius.
Overall
,
Dubai
and
Paris
have warmer conditions between April and September,
while
Sydney
has hot weather in the first three and
last
two months. The climate patterns of
Paris
and
Dubai
are similar,
although
Dubai
has more hotter climate compared to
Paris
. In both ,cities the highest peak is between July and August, with nearly 36 centigrade in
Dubai
and 20 centigrade in
Paris
.
Paris
is bitterly cold from the
month
of November to February having temperatures less than 7 degrees.
Dubai
has comparatively less cold than
Sydney
in those months by having temperatures below 25.
In contrast
,
Sydney
has its highest
temperature
from October to March. It has the lowest
temperature
of 13 degrees in the
month
of July.
However
, It has the highest
temperature
in the first and final
month
of the year which is almost 24 degrees.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words temperature, paris, dubai, sydney, month with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • average monthly temperature
  • major cities
  • trends
  • temperature changes
  • comparisons
  • yearly pattern
  • geographical location
  • climate zones
  • significant variations
  • notable differences
  • peak temperatures
  • lowest temperatures
  • fluctuations
  • seasonal changes
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