The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the average monthly
temperature
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in
Paris
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,
Dubai
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and
Sydney
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for every
month
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. The
temperature
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is measured in Celsius.
Overall
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,
Dubai
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and
Paris
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have warmer conditions between April and September,
while
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Sydney
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has hot weather in the first three and
last
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two months. The climate patterns of
Paris
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and
Dubai
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are similar,
although
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Dubai
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has more hotter climate compared to
Paris
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. In both ,cities the highest peak is between July and August, with nearly 36 centigrade in
Dubai
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and 20 centigrade in
Paris
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.
Paris
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is bitterly cold from the
month
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of November to February having temperatures less than 7 degrees.
Dubai
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has comparatively less cold than
Sydney
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in those months by having temperatures below 25.
In contrast
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,
Sydney
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has its highest
temperature
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from October to March. It has the lowest
temperature
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of 13 degrees in the
month
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of July.
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, It has the highest
temperature
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in the first and final
month
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of the year which is almost 24 degrees.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words temperature, paris, dubai, sydney, month with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • average monthly temperature
  • major cities
  • trends
  • temperature changes
  • comparisons
  • yearly pattern
  • geographical location
  • climate zones
  • significant variations
  • notable differences
  • peak temperatures
  • lowest temperatures
  • fluctuations
  • seasonal changes
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