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2. Cycling is more environmentally friendly than other forms of transport. Why is it not popular in many places?

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Although
 cycling is more environmentally friendly than other forms of transport, it is not popular in many places. There are several reasons cause its unpopularity. For the most part, as the contemporary world is busier than it was in the past, individuals nowadays have a priority for forms of transport which don’t take much time.
Therefore
, they choose to use other vehicles
such
 as cars, and motorbikes,..
instead
 of bicycles. On top of that, cycling is more physically demanding than riding a motorbike or driving a car.
This
 tends to discourage people from choosing
this
 method, especially on a hot and sunny day or when they have to travel a long distance. In a nutshell,
due to
 the disadvantages that cycling has brought, more and more people don’t prefer to use
this
 form of transport
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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