Imagine that you have become successful in any field you want. Make a short presentation of how you have achieved that

As a chef in my own Michelin 3-star restaurant, I would like to share with you my stories and how can I succeed as you can see.
Besides
professional
knowledge
, there are many other things that will determine your success and professionalism. The first factor is always to keep your workplace clean - Practice being neat, tidy and always ready to serve. The second is to keep your knife always sharp - you must practice harder and harder to keep your skills in the best state and be willing to update new skills and trends.
Study
unstoppable. Because the
knowledge
you
study
yesterday can be out of update today and many new interesting things appear everyday. You should update your
knowledge
,
study
new skills, dig your profession deeply and share your
knowledge
with others.
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that, you
also
need to
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focus
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seasoning skills- you have to improve your sensitive ability to realize the smallest change in your dish
as well as
the sudden increase or decrease in demands , ingredients, and customer habits,... The next factor is Temperature control. Just like adjusting the temperature when cooking to ensure food is just cooked. You must
study
how to control your attitudes and emotions carefully. Because these factors are difficult to control and adjust. How do you react when you seem will be late for the deadline or be misunderstood by colleagues or managers? How you do respond to complaints or negative criticism from others? If you can keep calm to ponder carefully, you can give wise feedback to all problems.
Last
but not least, Don't refuse even the smallest job. As you know, a house is built buy many small bricks and we can not count exactly how many bricks and other efforts are to build up the house. But without the small brick, the construction will be very difficult. In some cases, the smallest job can bring a big profit and impact the whole process to success. If you ignore or disregard small things, you might miss many chances to get profits or change your life.
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