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Each year, the crime rate increases. What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?

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Crime
 and criminal activities are some of the most troubling issues of today's life.
Due to
 known and unknown factors
crime
 rate is rising day by day,
hence
 there are many effective ways that can prevent criminals from committing
crimes
. Defining offence is the first step to preventing it. scandal can be classified into different categories from minor to severe. Petty
crimes
such
 as graffiti or mugging are
crimes
 that do not sabotage people’s lives, severe
crimes
such
 as murder and kidnapping are the
crimes
 that put people’s lives and well-being in danger. In my opinion, the most and first reason for
crime
 is bankruptcy. when people are in impecunious circumstances, tend to do anything that keeps their survival. They might start with petty
crimes
 like stealing fruits from groceries or big ones like robbery.
Poverty
 threatens people’s lives and it can make them do immoral acts. Another factor which can have an impact on the
crime
 rate is considered to be parenting. Criminals often have a traumatic childhood history that causes them an underlying rage. Neglectful or abusive parenting can affect a child’s mental health and when the child becomes an adult, its traumas can reveal themselves in destructive behaviour.
In addition
 to
poverty
 and
parenting
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 there are many other factors that can lead to acts of
crime
,
however
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crime
 can be prevented and criminals can be guided and helped by the government’s wisdom.
To conclude
, as it is mentioned in the third paragraph
poverty
 is the main reason for
crime
 and
poverty
 disposal. we can’t have a society free of offenders,
therefore
 government should provide low-income citizens with a variety of jobs and help them to earn their own money.
Moreover
, educating pregnant families about child’s mental health and teaching them how to take care of their children’s mental health can be effective.
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