Animal are in danger of extinction. Some people say that we should protect only those animals which are useful to humans. Do you agree or disagree with this.

As the development of our society, the relationship between

humans

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and

animals

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are

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becoming intense. Protecting

animals

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has become a topic that people have been talking to. Some people hold the idea that

humans

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should only protect the

animals

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which are useful to

humans

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, which is not persuadable to me. The reasons are as follows. Living on

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plannet

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planet

,

humans

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need the conditions to survive.

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, we should protect the

environment

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,

our

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and our

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home. The

environment

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is not only the air quality,

the

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and the

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trees; it is a whole

eco system

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ecosystem

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. We should treat all

things

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in

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ecosphere nicely. There is a theory called

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the Butterfly

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Effect, which indicates that A affects B, B affects

C.

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C

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C affects D... Eventually when you do not see the

connect

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connection between

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two

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,

but

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apply

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the change of one would make

great

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impact on the other. It applies in

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case:

humans

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would only see some

animals

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are "useful" for

humans

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, but the ones that we think are "useless" might be useful for

animals

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that are useful for us.

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, we cannot protect some and ignore others. We should protect all living creatures on

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plannet

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planet

. Another reason is that

humans

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are not the

dominator

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of the world.

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the idea of "survival of the fittest", all living

beings

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on Earth have to adapt to the

environment

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. We human

beings

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are not an exception.

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, we are making

to

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too

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many changes to the

environment

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. We hunt,

we

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and we

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cut down trees. A lot of our actions make the

environment

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changed

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, and

animals

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thus

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need to adapt to a new

environment

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. Once they cannot, they

extinct

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are extinct

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. Human

beings

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might not be affected directly for now, but we will eventually take the

consquence

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consequence

consequences

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, we should protect the

currently

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environment

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including all living

beings

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and

non living

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non-living

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things

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from now

.

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on.

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In a nutshell, there are inner connections

of

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all the

things

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on

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plannet

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planet

. We

humans

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also

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need to apply

to

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apply

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the rules of living in

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world. We should start

protect

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it from now before it is too late.