Animal are in danger of extinction. Some people say that we should protect only those animals which are useful to humans. Do you agree or disagree with this.

As the development of our society, the relationship between

humans

and

animals

are

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becoming intense. Protecting

animals

has become a topic that people have been talking to. Some people hold the idea that

humans

should only protect the

animals

which are useful to

humans

, which is not persuadable to me. The reasons are as follows. Living on

this

plannet

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planet

,

humans

need the conditions to survive.

Therefore

, we should protect the

environment

,

our

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and our

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home. The

environment

is not only the air quality,

the

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and the

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trees; it is a whole

eco system

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ecosystem

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. We should treat all

things

in

this

ecosphere nicely. There is a theory called

Butterfly

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the Butterfly

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Effect, which indicates that A affects B, B affects

C.

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C

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C affects D... Eventually when you do not see the

connect

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connection between

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two

things

,

but

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apply

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the change of one would make

great

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impact on the other. It applies in

this

case:

humans

would only see some

animals

are "useful" for

humans

, but the ones that we think are "useless" might be useful for

animals

that are useful for us.

Therefore

, we cannot protect some and ignore others. We should protect all living creatures on

this

plannet

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planet

. Another reason is that

humans

are not the

dominator

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of the world.

According to

the idea of "survival of the fittest", all living

beings

on Earth have to adapt to the

environment

. We human

beings

are not an exception.

However

, we are making

to

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too

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many changes to the

environment

. We hunt,

we

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and we

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cut down trees. A lot of our actions make the

environment

changed

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, and

animals

thus

need to adapt to a new

environment

. Once they cannot, they

extinct

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. Human

beings

might not be affected directly for now, but we will eventually take the

consquence

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consequence

consequences

.

Therefore

, we should protect the

currently

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environment

including all living

beings

and

non living

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things

from now

.

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In a nutshell, there are inner connections

of

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all the

things

on

this

plannet

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planet

. We

humans

also

need to apply

to

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apply

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the rules of living in

this

world. We should start

protect

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protecting

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it from now before it is too late.