The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given chart illustrates the information about the number of tourists
visitied
the European country in a period of time.
Correct your spelling
visiting
visited
Overall
, the chart shows the percentage of overseas visitors to the differents
spots in the country namely Correct your spelling
different
coastal
side,mountains and Correct article usage
the coastal
the
lakes between the Correct article usage
apply
year
1987 and 2007.
Nearly half of the people visited the coast in the year 1987, Fix the agreement mistake
years
past
five years it shows a little downtrend, but it gradually increased in the following years and reached its peak Correct article usage
the past
over
70 per cent Change preposition
of over
visitors
in 2007. The mountains are visited by only 2000 tourists, Change preposition
of visitors
eventhough
it showed a steady increase in the trend.
Only a small amount of tourists Correct your spelling
even though
have seen
the lakes in the Wrong verb form
saw
begining
, it shows a gradual improvement, but Correct your spelling
beginning
then
, after the year 1992 , the difference in numbers have
Unnecessary verb
apply
sky rocketed
for five years Correct your spelling
skyrocketed
then
it faces a downtrend , only 50,000 have
visited the lakes in 2007.Unnecessary verb
apply
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