The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given chart illustrates the information about the number of tourists

visitied

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visiting

visited

the European country in a period of time.

Overall

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, the chart shows the percentage of overseas visitors to the

differents

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different

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spots in the country namely

coastal

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the coastal

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side,mountains and

the

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apply

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lakes between the

year

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years

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1987 and 2007. Nearly half of the people visited the coast in the year 1987,

past

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the past

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five years it shows a little downtrend, but it gradually increased in the following years and reached its peak

over

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of over

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70 per cent

visitors

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of visitors

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in 2007. The mountains are visited by only 2000 tourists,

eventhough

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even though

it showed a steady increase in the trend. Only a small amount of tourists

have seen

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saw

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the lakes in the

begining

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beginning

, it shows a gradual improvement, but

then

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, after the year 1992 , the difference in numbers

have

Unnecessary verb

apply

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sky rocketed

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skyrocketed

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for five years

then

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it faces a downtrend , only 50,000

have

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apply

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visited the lakes in 2007.