The table gives information about the population of new Zealand from 2011 to 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparison where necessary.
The table above provides data about the changes in a population divided into 5 parts of ages (all ages, under 15, 15-39, 40-64 and 65+) in New Zealand in 1 year.
Overall
, the whole figure of citizens slightly enhanced, Linking Words
in addition
, all the groups after 15 increased a bit, Linking Words
while
the total of adolescents under 15 dropped.
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To begin
with, the whole population expanded from 4,381 to 4,410 million and the total expansion in percentage is 0.6% in year measurement. The number of individuals under 15 decreased to a small degree by 0.2% from 898 to 896 thousand people, Linking Words
in addition
, 15-39-year-old people Linking Words
also
had the same results.
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On the other hand
, the rest of the residents (40-64 and 65+) increased by 0.6% and 4%, respectively. Linking Words
Additionally
, the level of 40-64-year-old individuals grew to 8 thousand people, from 1,331 to 1,339 million. The oldest generation, Linking Words
however
, is the smallest proportion of the country, but with the highest growth in statistics.Linking Words
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