The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The two charts give information about people visiting to Ashdown Museum during the
year
before and the year
after it was refurbished. The table compares figure
for the data of Fix the agreement mistake
figures
visitors
, and the pie charts show the percentage of respondents in satisfaction of Ashdown Museum refurbishment between two periods.
Overall
, it is clear that
travellers increased after respondents, from 74,000 visitors
to 92,000 visitors
. We also
can see that the ratings of customer satisfaction surveys which
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show
more
likely to recommend.
In more detail, a majority of Add a missing verb
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visitors
in the year
before rebuilding were dissatisfaction
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satisfied
, at 30%. Add a missing verb
were satisfied
By contrast
, in the year
after refurbishment, there was a main rate in the visitors
who were satisfied, around 40%. Yet, the dissatisfied travellers accounted for 15%.
It is interesting to note that when Ashdown Museum finished to redecorate
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redecorating
visitors
satisfied
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were satisfied
increasly
, from 15% to 35 %.Correct your spelling
increasingly
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