Write a letter to a local restaurant that is very noisy. In your letter Introduce yourself Describe the problem Say what actions you will take

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to bring your attention towards the recent

music

noise, which is coming from your restaurant. First of all, my name is Jen Kale, and I live in the building opposite your restaurant. I am

also

a representative of the local area council. Recently, both my neighbours and I have been facing issues with the high volume of the

music

. On finding we came to know it is coming from your places. It is hard for locals to focus on their night routines especially, for the elderly to sleep and for kids to focus on their studies.

Therefore

, it would be highly appreciated if you could stop the

music

after 10.00 pm. In other terms, we have to complain about

this

to the police station they might force you to stop

music

completely or at worst your permit can be held for certain times. I hope you will consider the letter and will treat the matter seriously to resolve the issue. Yours faithfully, Jen Kale

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

173 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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