Write a letter to a local restaurant that is very noisy. In your letter Introduce yourself Describe the problem Say what actions you will take

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
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letter to bring your attention towards the recent
music
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noise, which is coming from your restaurant. First of all, my name is Jen Kale, and I live in the building opposite your restaurant. I am
also
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a representative of the local area council. Recently, both my neighbours and I have been facing issues with the high volume of the
music
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. On finding we came to know it is coming from your places. It is hard for locals to focus on their night routines especially, for the elderly to sleep and for kids to focus on their studies.
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, it would be highly appreciated if you could stop the
music
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after 10.00 pm. In other terms, we have to complain about
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to the police station they might force you to stop
music
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completely or at worst your permit can be held for certain times. I hope you will consider the letter and will treat the matter seriously to resolve the issue. Yours faithfully, Jen Kale
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