Write a letter to a local restaurant that is very noisy. In your letter Introduce yourself Describe the problem Say what actions you will take

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to bring your attention towards the recent

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noise, which is coming from your restaurant. First of all, my name is Jen Kale, and I live in the building opposite your restaurant. I am

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a representative of the local area council. Recently, both my neighbours and I have been facing issues with the high volume of the

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. On finding we came to know it is coming from your places. It is hard for locals to focus on their night routines especially, for the elderly to sleep and for kids to focus on their studies.

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, it would be highly appreciated if you could stop the

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after 10.00 pm. In other terms, we have to complain about

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to the police station they might force you to stop

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completely or at worst your permit can be held for certain times. I hope you will consider the letter and will treat the matter seriously to resolve the issue. Yours faithfully, Jen Kale

jaimini2000Wed Sep 20 2023

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task response

Ensure that all aspects of the task prompt are addressed clearly and fully in the letter.

coherence and cohesion

Improve the use of cohesive devices such as linking words and phrases to enhance the overall coherence of the letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

173 words

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