It is believed that there is a negative impact of tourism on tourist spots which is majorly due to the behaviour of people who visit there. Why do you think that people behave badly when they visit some places? What measures can be taken to resolve this issue? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Due to
the unacceptable behaviour of the tourists
, tourism is having a bad impact on tourists
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tourist
places
as per the opinion of many people
in the
society. There are various reasons for the bad behaviour of the Correct article usage
apply
people
and many solutions that can help to solve this
problem to prevent the tourists
places
from such
exploitation. In the upcoming paragraphs
we are going to discuss both reasons and solutions for Add a comma
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this
problem.
Out of varied
reasons for Correct article usage
the varied
unacceptable
behaviour of the Correct article usage
the unacceptable
people
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,people
one
main reason is that
carelessness by the government Correct word choice
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employees
who are not taking care of the monuments and buildings for which they are employeed
and paidCorrect your spelling
employed
off
. They were just marking their presence and Change preposition
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then
evaporated
like air. Now when Wrong verb form
evaporating
tourists
see the buildings are already dirty by littering garbage here and there and young boys and girls writing useless things on the walls, they also
do the same things. Another one
reasonCorrect pronoun usage
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,
could be that nowadays Remove the comma
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people
who visits
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such
places
are very insensitive and irresponsible that
they do not have any love Change preposition
in that
with
their country. They are not aware Change preposition
for
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of
about
the importance of these Change preposition
of
places
. These are just Correct article usage
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a
common buildings Correct article usage
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for
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them
which are made of up bricks and cement. The new generations did not care Correct pronoun usage
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abouts
the sentiments related to these Correct your spelling
about
tourists
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tourist
places
.
There are many measures we can take to prevent damage of
our Change preposition
to
tourists
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tourist
places
. Firstly
, the government should have to be strict with the employees
and a regular insepection
should be conducted and strict punishment Correct your spelling
inspection
inspections
such
as suspension for 1 week given to one
or two employees
so that the others will be on line
. Correct your spelling
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Secondly
, it is the responsibility
of parents and teachers who have to taught
a sense of Add a missing verb
be taught
responsibility
to maintain these precious places
which we visit. The children went with their teachers on school
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trip
or with parents so it should be their Fix the agreement mistake
trips
responsibility
as well to take care that good values should be taught their
children at that time and they should not pollute the environment of these ancient Change preposition
to their
mounuments
and Correct your spelling
monuments
places
.
To conclude
, therefore
this
is the responsibility
of everyone including Correct article usage
the government
government
, their Correct article usage
the government
employees
, teachers and parents to set a good example and taught
good values to the new generation and follow the same values by themselves. Wrong verb form
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