It is believed that there is a negative impact of tourism on tourist spots which is majorly due to the behaviour of people who visit there. Why do you think that people behave badly when they visit some places? What measures can be taken to resolve this issue? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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the unacceptable behaviour of the

tourists

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, tourism is having a bad impact on

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tourists

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places

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as per the opinion of many

people

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in

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society. There are various reasons for the bad behaviour of the

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and many solutions that can help to solve

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problem to prevent the

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places

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from

such

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exploitation. In the upcoming

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we are going to discuss both reasons and solutions for

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problem. Out of

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reasons for

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the unacceptable

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behaviour of the

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people

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one

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main reason is

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carelessness by the government

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who are not taking care of the monuments and buildings for which they are

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employed

and paid

off

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. They were just marking their presence and

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evaporated

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like air. Now when

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see the buildings are already dirty by littering garbage here and there and young boys and girls writing useless things on the walls, they

also

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do the same things. Another

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one

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reason

,

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could be that nowadays

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who

visits

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such

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places

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are very insensitive and irresponsible

that

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they do not have any love

with

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for

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their country. They are not aware

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of

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about

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the importance of these

places

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. These are just

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a

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common buildings

for

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them

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which are made of up bricks and cement. The new generations did not care

abouts

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about

the sentiments related to these

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tourists

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places

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. There are many measures we can take to prevent damage

of

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our

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tourists

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places

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.

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, the government should have to be strict with the

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and a regular

insepection

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inspection

inspections

should be conducted and strict punishment

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as suspension for 1 week given to

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or two

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so that the others will be

on line

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online

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.

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, it is the

responsibility

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of parents and teachers who have to

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a sense of

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to maintain these precious

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which we visit. The children went with their teachers on

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a school

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trip

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or with parents so it should be their

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as well to take care that good values should be taught

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children at that time and they should not pollute the environment of these ancient

mounuments

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monuments

and

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.

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,

therefore

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this

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is the

responsibility

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of everyone including

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the government

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government

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the government

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, their

employees

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, teachers and parents to set a good example and

taught

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good values to the new generation and follow the same values by themselves.

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not a

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one day

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process, it will take some time.