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In some countries, the number of police officers in active service is decreasing. What do yhou think may be the reasons for this? What effects might this have on society?

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In some specific
countries
, many number of
police
officers
 in active service is
lowering
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decreasing
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due to
 the work pressure. Considering
police
 people, in some particular
countries
 they are working
in
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on
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double
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a double
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 shift basis which causes them many health problems and
this
 leads to
lot
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a lot
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 of effects in
society
.
Firstly
, inactive
of
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apply
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police
officers
 may include several reasons
such
 as working both
the
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apply
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shift
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shifts
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 that cause stress, loss in
their
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apply
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energy levels and so on.
Moreover
, it is necessary to have the holidays.
Whereas
, in these
type
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types
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 of
countries
, the holidays are very limited. So, it could cause
lack
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a lack
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in
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of
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 spending time with family,
As a result
, these kinds of conditions can
bring inactive
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cause an increase
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 in work ethics.
Secondly
,
the
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apply
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society
 might suffer a lot
due to
 the inactiveness of
police
officers
. The possibilities of theft in a locality can get increased, crimes in the
society
 will develop and much more. There are other reasons
where
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why
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 people
involve
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are involved
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 in many illegal activities with
thier
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their
 indistinct knowledge. So, it is important to keep
the
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apply
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society
 in a healthy manner
while
 people are well controlled with
the
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apply
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reduced problems. I conclude strongly,
health
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that health
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 is a major concern
to
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for
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the
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apply
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police
officers
 that can cause wealth in
society
. Apart from spending many hours
in
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at
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 work,
countries
 can give rest and health benefits to the
police
 person that can lead to
lessen
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lessening
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 theft and crimes in
society
.
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