The pie charts below show the age groups of the users on different social media platforms in Australia in 2011
The pie charts illustrate the preferred social media
platforms
(Facebook
, Twitter, Linkedln, Google+, Pinterest) among Australians varying from the years 2011 to 2013.
Overall
, Facebook
is the most common platform while
Pinterest is the least well-known social media app.
It can be seen from the pie chart that over a 3 years period, from 2011 to 2013, Facebook
although
remains Correct word choice
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as
the most commonly use platform by the vast majority, the percentage has decreased from 59% in 2011 to 38% in 2013. From the figures, it can be inferred that Change preposition
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Facebook
is gradually used less as other platforms
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.
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On the contrary
, the remaining 4 media platforms
had a rise in percentage throughout the course. The most major increase is shown through the Google+ platform. The initial percentage in 2011 was 5% and rapidly increased in one year to twice as much (10% in 2012), the growth lessened by 1% from the year 2012 to 2013, having only a 4% rise. The other 3 platforms
had more consistent increases, as shown in Twitter where the growth is by 2% each year.Submitted by yeshomeclass on
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