The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010.​Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010.​Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart displays information about the gender
ratio
of
teachers
, in 6 different types of educational institutions (Nursery/preschool, Primary school, Secondary school, College, Private training institute and University) in the year 2010.
Overall
, females are the predominant gender in
education
compared to males, especially in Pre-school and Primary and
decrease
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the higher the
education
institute.
Consequently
, male
teachers
experienced an opposite trend as the
ratio
of male
teachers
peaked for post-secondary
education
. It is clear from the chart that female
teachers
ratio
was at its highest for Nurseries and preschools, dominating at around 94% compared to male
teachers
with an estimated 6%. After that though, the
ratio
of women
teachers
fell off the higher the
education
level offered for students, which was seen through a slight drop of about 4% from Preschools to Primary followed by a huge drop from 90% to about 54% from Primary to Secondary.
This
trend continued until there remained only about 28% were female professors at the university level. Concurrently, the male-teacher
ratio
is at its lowest point for Nursery and Preschool, which following an increase of around 4% when moving to Primary school, has been on a rise ever since with a massive jump from 10% to nearly 44% from Primary to Secondary. Male
teachers
' percentage
finally
overtook female
teachers
for private training institutes, with 56% of
teachers
reported to be males and 44% of
teachers
being female
,
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before it
finally
reached its highest where about 72% of university professors are male.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Comparative analysis
  • Distribution
  • Gender disparities
  • Educational settings
  • Predominance
  • Representation
  • Societal biases
  • Systemic biases
  • Recruitment
  • Accessibility
  • Work-life balance
  • Societal expectations
  • Perceived suitability
  • Efforts to balance
  • Gender equality
  • Policymakers
  • Educational leaders
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