The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010.​Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010.​Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010.​Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart displays information about the gender
ratio
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of
teachers
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, in 6 different types of educational institutions (Nursery/preschool, Primary school, Secondary school, College, Private training institute and University) in the year 2010.
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, females are the predominant gender in
education
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compared to males, especially in Pre-school and Primary and
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the higher the
education
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institute.
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, male
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experienced an opposite trend as the
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of male
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peaked for post-secondary
education
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. It is clear from the chart that female
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ratio
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was at its highest for Nurseries and preschools, dominating at around 94% compared to male
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with an estimated 6%. After that though, the
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of women
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fell off the higher the
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level offered for students, which was seen through a slight drop of about 4% from Preschools to Primary followed by a huge drop from 90% to about 54% from Primary to Secondary.
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trend continued until there remained only about 28% were female professors at the university level. Concurrently, the male-teacher
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is at its lowest point for Nursery and Preschool, which following an increase of around 4% when moving to Primary school, has been on a rise ever since with a massive jump from 10% to nearly 44% from Primary to Secondary. Male
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' percentage
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overtook female
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for private training institutes, with 56% of
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reported to be males and 44% of
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being female
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before it
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reached its highest where about 72% of university professors are male.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally".
Vocabulary: Replace the words ratio, teachers, education with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Comparative analysis
  • Distribution
  • Gender disparities
  • Educational settings
  • Predominance
  • Representation
  • Societal biases
  • Systemic biases
  • Recruitment
  • Accessibility
  • Work-life balance
  • Societal expectations
  • Perceived suitability
  • Efforts to balance
  • Gender equality
  • Policymakers
  • Educational leaders
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