The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features amd make comparison where relevant.

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. 

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features amd make comparison where relevant.
The flow chart illustrates the way in which
noodles
are formulated. The essay describes the main features and procedure.
Overall
, it can be demonstrated that the process by which
noodles
are is manufactured a multi-step industry process, which consists of five stages, storage silos and mixer, dough sheets to discs, cooking and drying, adding nutrients, and labelling for purchasing. In the first stages, the raw materials flour are collected for storage silos.
Then
,
this
process goes through the mixer with water and oil conditions in rollers. The second stage, the dough sheets which are made by roller machine, are under the development of both dough strips and spaghetti discs. At that time, the slide sheets were replaced with a round shape. In the third part, the round-shaped
noodles
poured be cooked with oil and
lastly
dried.
As a result
, the appearance of
noodles
looks delicious and tasty. The drying
noodles
are kept in a cup where need to add some ingredients like vegetables and spices in the four stages.
Finally
, levelled and seal the cup of
noodles
which is an Impressive Outlook of the cup and it is ready to purchase for the public.
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