The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features amd make comparison where relevant.

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The flow chart illustrates the way in which

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are formulated. The essay describes the main features and procedure.

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, it can be demonstrated that the process by which

noodles

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are is manufactured a multi-step industry process, which consists of five stages, storage silos and mixer, dough sheets to discs, cooking and drying, adding nutrients, and labelling for purchasing. In the first stages, the raw materials flour are collected for storage silos.

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this

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process goes through the mixer with water and oil conditions in rollers. The second stage, the dough sheets which are made by roller machine, are under the development of both dough strips and spaghetti discs. At that time, the slide sheets were replaced with a round shape. In the third part, the round-shaped

noodles

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poured be cooked with oil and

lastly

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dried.

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, the appearance of

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looks delicious and tasty. The drying

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are kept in a cup where need to add some ingredients like vegetables and spices in the four stages.

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, levelled and seal the cup of

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which is an Impressive Outlook of the cup and it is ready to purchase for the public.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

194 words

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The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features amd make comparison where relevant.

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