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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel

#hotel #home #papers
Dear Sir, I wrote
this
 Letter after the meeting, It was a good opportunity to attend
such
 a wonderful conference. I really enjoyed working with you and gaining extraordinary knowledge about The Subject. Unfortunately,
while
 searching my papers, I realized I had forgotten an important paper that related to my company project. I put it on my Desk, It is only one piece of paper with a black frame. The paper is very important because it relates to my company project. We have worked for a long time on it and my company has asked me about it. If you find it can you call me on 01892482 or reply to my letter back? I would really appreciate your effort. I will come and take it as soon as I can. In the end, thanks for your understanding and I am very grateful for knowing you is an honor for me. Sincerely, Mohammed Salih
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