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In some countries, more are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

#countries #history #house #people #research
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Nowadays, figuring out
about
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the
history
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 of the place that each person is living in is an essential demand.
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one
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can be
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by
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 many reasons,
such
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 as the demand
of knowing
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to know
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 about the illegal facts,
the
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 mysterious stories of the
house
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.
This
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about
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those possible reasons and some
methods
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people
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 could use to access
further
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information
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 about their living place.
Firstly
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,
people
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 need to know about the
history
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 of their
house
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 in order to find out the illegal sides of it. In
details
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, the
house
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 might be the collateral of the previous owner, or it can be the asset under dispute.
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, many investors recommend that it is
nessecary
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necessary
 to carefully
asked
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 about the dispute of the
house
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 before paying for it in order not to be cheated.
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, many
people
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 need to know about a
house
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’s
history
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 because they are aware of a haunted
house
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.
People
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 always avoid
to pay
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 for
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house
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a house
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 or a building which has various haunting tales.
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, Ho Chi Minh City citizens carefully find out about
variety
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 of haunting mysteries of
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the Thuan
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 Kieu building, so they prefer not to invest
on
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 it. Moving on to some
methods
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 that
people
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 can use to search for
those
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essential
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, there are three main types of
methods
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 recommended. The first
one
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 is asking the local government. The cadres at the local
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’s
committee
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 can provide the official map of the
house
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.
Due to
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 that map,
people
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 can know whether the
house
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 has any parts that are built illegally. Another effective way is asking local
people
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 and
neighbors
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neighbours
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. Those
people
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 might know about some mysterious tales of the
house
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such
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 as the haunted stories
,
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and, private
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private
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the private
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 life of the previous owners. The next way which is not only effective but
also
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that
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surfing the internet.
This
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one
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 is extremely
faster
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fast
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.
Moreover
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, the range of
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 that you can search is wide.
However
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, the accuracy of
those
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this
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information
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 is doubtful. In conclusion, searching for the
history
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 of the building is an essential demand of many
people
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,
due to
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 many reasons.
People
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 can choose more than
one
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 in various efficient
methods
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 to have the
information
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 they need.
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