The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given process diagrams illustrate the
cycle
of Use synonyms
salmon
’s life, a species of large fish.
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Overall
, there are three stages of the life Linking Words
cycle
from the Use synonyms
salmon
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eggs
phase in the upper river to the adult Use synonyms
salmon
phase in the open sea. Use synonyms
In addition
, it takes about ten and a half years of Linking Words
cycle
time for Use synonyms
Salmon
.
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To begin
, the first Linking Words
stage
is the breeding process of the Use synonyms
salmon
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eggs
in the upper river with slow-moving water. Use synonyms
Salmon
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eggs
are placed under the reeds and small stones. It takes 5 to 6 months before the Use synonyms
eggs
turn into fry with a size of 3 – 8 cm. Use synonyms
Then
, the second Linking Words
stage
is the fries moving to the fast-flowing water known as a lower river.
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Moreover
, after approximately 4 years of the Linking Words
cycle
, the fry grows to be a smolt with a size of 12 – 15 cm. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the third Linking Words
stage
is the smolts migrating to the open sea. The smolts stay in the open sea for approximately 5 years before growing to be adult Use synonyms
salmon
with a significant increase in their size to 70 – 80 cm. Use synonyms
In addition
, Linking Words
after
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this
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stage
, the Use synonyms
cycle
perpetuates and the life Use synonyms
cycle
repeats again from the breeding Use synonyms
stage
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cycle, salmon, eggs, stage with synonyms.
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