The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.
The pie charts show the amount of
water
used in San
Diego
, California
, and in the world in three specific sectors which are residential, industry, and agriculture.
Overall
, it is evident that San
Diego
and worldwide see a significant discrepancy in water
usage between sectors whereas
California
allocated rather equally in these sectors.
In terms of residential and agriculture, the former takes up the majority of water
in San
Diego
and California
, at 60% and 39%, respectively whereas
only a minor percentage in
worldwide Change preposition
of
water
comes into the household. In the meantime, the latter illustrate
a sharp contrast, in which 69% of worldwide Change the verb form
illustrates
water
is allocated for this
purpose, over three times higher than San
Diego
County and California
.
When it comes to Industry, San
Diego
afford as much water
as worldwide, at 23%, which is 10% lower than California
, at 33%Submitted by linhng28122001 on
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