The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.

The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.
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The pie charts show the amount of
water
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used in
San
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Diego
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,
California
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, and in the world in three specific sectors which are residential, industry, and agriculture.
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, it is evident that
San
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Diego
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and worldwide see a significant discrepancy in
water
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usage between sectors
whereas
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California
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allocated rather equally in these sectors. In terms of residential and agriculture, the former takes up the majority of
water
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in
San
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Diego
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and
California
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, at 60% and 39%, respectively
whereas
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only a minor percentage
in
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worldwide
water
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comes into the household. In the meantime, the latter
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a sharp contrast, in which 69% of worldwide
water
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is allocated for
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purpose, over three times higher than
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Diego
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County and
California
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. When it comes to Industry,
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Diego
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afford as much
water
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as worldwide, at 23%, which is 10% lower than
California
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, at 33%
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, san, diego, california with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • households
  • significant
  • industrial use
  • implications
  • agriculture
  • geographical
  • climatic
  • economic factors
  • patterns
  • sustainability
  • practices
  • surprising
  • exceptionally
  • improvements
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