Is freedom of speech vital in free society? agree or disagree?

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freedom
speech
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speech
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is when people easily can express their opinions and not shy or be afraid.
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generation
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that
freedom
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adult
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mean
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Y or post-Soviet people. To give an instance,a few days ago,I wanted to write a letter to the ministry. I don’t like
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system. Why if we
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for 5 minutes we need to hear swearing. We are not robots,people,especially children tend to be late. I consulted with elders,and they said that
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wrong about it. Maybe they’re right, discipline should be. We can’t be late ,but it’s not a
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problem. Why
this
is happening? Mostly
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raised
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with strict parents,where they can’t speak their minds. Another example
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,In
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that in
Iran, the authorities regularly detain journalists, human rights defenders and women who peacefully protest against the mandatory wearing of the hijab. But hijab is a person's choice, not an obligation. Nowadays teenagers,inversely consider that
freedom
of
speech
is important in our society.
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would say that I am an atheist to my peers they wouldn’t judge me. Because,by their
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we all have
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opinions and choices. If
i
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would say
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thing to an adult
generation
they would judge me and think that I’m a sinner.I believe that
freedom
of
speech
is an integral part of society which contributes to development. The right to choose and
freedom
of
speech
need to
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in society, but it must have boundaries. After all, it has a line between
freedom
of
speech
and
freedom
of action
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