The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.
The given illustration represents information about five different sources of energy in France in 1995 and one decade later.
Overall
, the most used energy production was coal in two periods of time ,furthermore
all items had increased, except petro.
It can be clearly seen that both gas and coal grew almost Add a comma
,furthermore
similarly
,
and kept all time the leadership position with approximately 30 per Remove the comma
apply
cent
for each other. However
, the percentage was not increased progressively , but it is in sum nearly 2 per cent
.
It is obvious that the smallest in percentage were energy production other and nuclear, but, both increased moderately, it is just below 2 times.
It is interesting to note that the biggest fall had
Petro, Verb problem
was
it
declined from 29.27 per Correct pronoun usage
which
cent
to 19.55 per cent
. Moreover
, it was in the middle of using
.Replace the word
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