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The diagram below shows the process for recycling plactic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plactic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram represents the procedure for recycling
plastic
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bottles
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.
Overall
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, it is clear from the picture that
how
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apply
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plastic
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bottles
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 waste are recycled to produce useful products.
Moreover
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, it involves some set of
process
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processes
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 to produce the new materials. The steps that are followed in order to make the plastics reusable are sorting,compressing into blocks,crushing and it goes on until it produces new products.
Firstly
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,
plastic
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bottles
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 were thrown by the people in dustbins.
Then
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 it gets collected by particular four wheeler vehicle
then
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 it moves to
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the recycling
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recycling
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recycle
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 centre for sorting purpose. All the gathered plastics were compressed into
set
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a set
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 of blocks. As soon as
plastic
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bottles
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 get compressed it immediately goes through the crushing process to break into smaller particles. As these
plastic
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 particles
washed
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are washed
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 cleanly,
it
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they
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goes
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go
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 on to
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plastic producing
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plastic-producing
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 pellets which
gives
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give
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 the output in
format
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the format
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 of raw material by heating.
In addition
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, raw materials were converted in the form of water
bottles
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, pencils, carry bags and many more.
This
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 cycle continues every time and more often repeatedly.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, bottles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "set" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycling
  • plastic bottles
  • collected
  • households
  • recycling centers
  • sorted
  • type
  • color
  • cleaned
  • labels
  • caps
  • shredded
  • small pieces
  • melted
  • formed
  • pellets
  • new plastic products
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