The table below shows information and prediction regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries.
The table illustrates and forecasts information about the changes in volume of the older people at age 65 and older in 1988, 2000 and 2030 in three different countries, namely
Canada
, Germany
and the UK
.
Overall
, we can see that the trend of the growth of old people was an
upward and it will continue until. Correct article usage
apply
Germany
has the highest rank, while
the UK
has the third rank.
In 1988, the population of old people in Germany
was about one-fifth, while
the percentage of
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in
Canada
and the UK
was about 16% and 14% respectively. After 12 years, in 2000, while
the proportion of older individuals rose by 1% in the UK
, the percentage in Canada
and Germany
increased by 5%, and reached 21% and 25% respectively.
It is predicted that after 30 years, in 2030, the population aged 65 and above in three countries will rise by about 5%. But the situation of all countries will not change in the table. Germany
with 30%, Canada
with 26% and the UK
with 20% will have the first,
second and third rank.Submitted by shahab_e2020 on
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