In future more people will choose to go to holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holidays. Do you agree or disagree?

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𝑴𝒚 𝒍𝒂𝒔𝒕 𝒉𝒐𝒍𝒊𝒅𝒂𝒚 My

last

holiday

was very funny. The first days of the

holiday

were exams.

Then

I relaxed in the village in the clean air and it was cooler than the city. And the view of nature is simply beautiful. Later I left for Tashkent. We relaxed there for a

while

. There

where

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were

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almost all the

entertaiment

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entertainment

parks in Tashkent. I especially liked that day, when we went to the zoo and water park. The most wonderful

things

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thing

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was when I tried almost all types of fast food and sushi. And on the

last

days of the

holiday

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we relaxed in the summer

cottege

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cottage

. But

after

this

rest I got sick. I had a wonderful

holiday

and a good summer

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Grammar mistakes
 

2 paragraphs

122 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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In future more people will choose to go to holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holidays. Do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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