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Time spent on smartphones and tablets, by category

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The presented pie chart shows the differences in
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 using smartphones and tablets,by class.  
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, the most
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 spent on playing games. It can be clearly shown that more
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 is spent on games in common is 92 per
cent
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, and social networking in common is 44 per
cent
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.,
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 almost the minimum spent
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 was in the news in sum it's 7 per
cent
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. It is clear from the 57 per
cent
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 of spent
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 on tablets had taken more than half of all categories and saved his leadership position.
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, the biggest decline was taken by "utilities" which have a difference of about 6 times in smartphones and tablets. It is interesting to note that both "other " and "music and videos" have in common 13 per
cent
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 in smartphones and it's equal to only one index of "music and smartphone.
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, if they both added up and compared , their change was about 8 per
cent
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.

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